Saturday, April 9, 2011

"Peter and the Boogeymen" Page 88 thru 90

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6 comments:

Kyle said...

I have the feeling that GF decided to have a little chat with Fallon instead of the police.

And we all know this isn't the last trick in Fallon's book either.

Todd said...

“We got that too. Don’t worry, my grandfather’s even more paranoid than you are.”

My favorite part. I like the cliffhanger, too.

MissLynx said...

Oh dear - the ending's a wee bit worrisome. Like Kyle, I suspect he's gone off to confront Fallon, and I can't see that ending terribly well for anyone.

But I think on the whole, my favourite line was: “Live a life that makes up for it.”

WV: Eralstr: a remote lake in the Ukraine, so deep that researchers have never been able to find the bottom. Sightings of lake monsters remain unconfirmed.

Rubberduck said...

Peter and Dill, hardboiled supernatural sorters-out! But I thought Dill wouldn't want to talk about it?

I do like that they're a bit more confident with this stuff, and I also think that telling much of this from Scott's perspective gets that across better than it would directly from Peter.

Uncists = A patch of absoutely flawless, perfect skin. They are spread by rare parasites, found mostly in California, and severe infestations can result in an overly beautiful population. The reccomended cure for an uncist is rubbing lard on the affected area.

Rai said...

Ahhhhh. I'm sorry I haven't been here to comment Mr. Pillsbury. D: I've been terribly busy with this whole I have to actually graduate and go out into the real world (what gives?).

The story is excellently morbid and i can't wait to see GF kick more (ahem) butt.

Comments for the past updates: I don't have an opinion on the prologue issue.

And for the ebooks, I'll have to get that application thing because I hate e-readers. Heh. Something about a good old fashioned paper back or hardcover that just melts my heart. Plus I'm apparently too old to figure out how to turn the darned pages.

But I think selling is a good idea. You definitely should be making money on these books. I'm obsessed with them. :) And if you ever want to hire a biological consultant I'm always here for you. ;D

Darren said...

Kyle -
I think your feeling is very accurate!

Todd -
Glad you liked them both!

MissLynx -
Cool, glad you liked it. It took me a little while to come up with what I would say to someone in the same situation...

Rubberduck -
Good point. I hadn't thought of it that way.

Rai -
No worries! Glad to see you back!

And very glad to know you're obsessed with the stories! Now I just need to get several hundred thousand OTHER people in the same state!