Monday, March 29, 2010

"Peter And The Snow Demon" Page 1 and 2



PETER AND THE SNOW DEMON


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3 comments:

Cat said...

Cool, proper Christmas ornaments! It's nice to see them doing something normal and family-like. Especially as a contrast to sinister shapes in the snow :P Gotta love Peter's attempts at convincing Grandfather about the ski trip!

By the way, you missed out an apostrophe in "good for five minutes' worth of work", and the past tense of "to drag" is "dragged", not "drug" (unless it was a demon tree and Grandfather dosed it with something to keep it docile :D )


WV: cryche. The awful crackling, crunching sound that fills you with foreboding and prevents you turning round, because you just *know* it's made by a snow demon's feet as it sneaks up behind you. Merely the sound of the word makes you feel as though an icicle has just slipped down the back of your neck.

Darren said...

Cat -
Thanks for the copy-editing!

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