Monday, November 8, 2010

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GRANDFATHER AND THE GROWN-UPS



One Day After The Attack


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5 comments:

Eldoran said...

I wonder how they will get out of this mess this time.

@Darren: Ok, it is a plastic tomb, but I stand by the remainder of my comment. Unless someone destroyed evidence, the given description (see quote below) clearly indicates that the evidence points to a source of the destruction from the inside. And any explanation to the contrary would at least require some clearly missing equipment.

quote:
He could clearly see the plastic tomb that had once held the mummy about 50 feet away. Now, though, instead of a smooth plastic box, the whole thing was cracked and shattered. The top looked like a giant splash of water, a close-up photo of a raindrop blasting into a puddle.
Then he realized that the jagged explosion of plastic was where the mummy had punched its way out.

Darren said...

Eldoran -
I didn't write "Hmmmmm...." because you got it wrong. I wrote "Hmmmmm..." because, yes, indeed, that's a key piece of information that will be important later in the story.

Darren said...

Eldoran -
But I didn't want to ADMIT it quite yet.

daymon34 said...

Well it also depends on how close they look at the damage done to the tomb. They did have three kids and one holding a gun caught red handed.

At least he didn't say the nasty L word yet.

Darren said...

daymon34 -
The nasty 'L' word? What's that?!

Lice?

Larceny?

Loony?