Chapter 1 - A Really Bad Afternoon
Chapter 2 - Say What?
Chapter 2 - Say What?
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- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
2 comments:
Goodness gracious me...
I do enjoy the looks inside Dill's mind.
Actually, Mrs. Cashew, I believe the actual correct usage would be 'really well'. Alternatively, if you're going to allow 'real' as a qualifying adverb (possibly?) you may as well allow 'good' as an adverb in its idiomatic phrasing. Linguistics nerds, away!
Also, wow, way to motivate Dill to learn, Mrs. Cashew. And you couldn't have told him he was in danger of failing while there was time to do something about it? I know you're the 'evil teacher' character and you're bound by dramatic convention, but come on!
...story convention nerds, away!
So! My prediction is that Dill will turn to SATAN to cheat on tests. Thus bringing in the demon.
Anamiti = A very pleasant Italian seaside town, noted for its wonderful seafood and exciting mafia shootouts.
Rubberduck -
Haha, thanks for the grammar pointer. As some of you know, it's not always my strong suit.
Although be assured that when I write in the characters' voices incorrectly - especially Peter and Dill's - it's intended to be incorrect 99% of the time.
But there's always that 1%.
Yeah, Mrs. Cashew is a pretty horrible teacher, isn't she? But if she were great, we'd never get this story...
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