Tuesday, October 12, 2010

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6 comments:

Unknown said...

I sort of like the idea of a friendly werewolf for a change. Although I'm surprised his fingers are so elongated, rather than stubby. I assume "anymores" is a typo.

Rubberduck said...

I feel embarassed I didn't twig the moon rock. I must hand in my careful reader card.

So does this mean Dill will transform further next full moon? Is it a progressive thing? Will he eventually go full wolf if he transforms enough times? Is there a future plot about this?

Antheati = One use for a kettle of boiling water.

Seaspray said...

Basically, the reason I think that Dill is transforming more is that he gets a case of 'lunar tan'

Before you look strangely at me, some people stand outside on a normal hot day and just get a tiny tan, others burn right?

Your normal werewolf 'burns' in a full moon. Dill just tans.

Dill however is currently in the lunar equivalent of doing the hula naked in the Sahara. If he just burns he's lucky.

Cat said...

If Dill goes on a killing spree as a werewolf, will he get in trouble with Mrs Cashew? Will she recognise him from his coat and give him a detention? Or will he just eat her? As long as he doesn't infect her; Mrs Cashew as a werewolf would be hideous.

If Dill can talk and think (well, as much as he usually can anyway) then we might not have a killing spree. Maybe he can use it to his advantage when the Mummy comes to life - Wolfman vs The Mummy!

By the way, when Dill says “It hurts. Like growing pains,” and then it says how his werewolfism distorts it, a "feels" appears from nowhere: "Heels like growing hains..."

daymon34 said...

Moon rock, yeah. Peter, Dill, and Gwen all learned that wolfs will change with a moon rock present. That could be useful sometime later, if they find a way to keep it from changing till needed.

Darren said...

Todd -
Thanks for the typo!

There will be spinoff of PETER AND THE VAMPIRES, titled DILL THE FRIENDLY WEREWOLF!

Rubberduck -
Why embarrassed?! You were surprised! I surprised you! It's all good!

As for the questions:

Hmmmmm...

Seaspray -
Interesting theory...I might make use of it. In fact, it sounds almost like the way Dill would describe it!

"Butt nekkid in the desert."

He, of course, would not know what the Sahara is.

Cat -
Thank you for the typo! -sigh- I made a change in the dialogue, but forgot to make a corresponding change later on...so now it's back to the original.

Wolfman vs The Mummy?

Let's get ready to RUMBLLLLLLLLEEEEEE!

daymon34 -
Useful LATER?!

HMMMMMMM...