Monday, August 22, 2011

"Peter And The Substitute Teacher" Ch. 10 and 11

Chapter 10 - Party Time
Chapter 11 - Room For One Less




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5 comments:

Um the Muse said...

"He just keep watching" should be "He just kept watching."

That part where Dill smooshed his ice cream sandwich into his hair was priceless.

Rubberduck said...

Motorbikes bad, but a ten-year-old's party is A-OK?

Actually Ms. Valinda arriving to Peter's party on the back of Jax's motorbike would be a heck of a twist...

Also, and because I hate all your brains:

"Ah, finally, she's here." Peter turned. Grandfather had stalked out of the house in one of his best suits to meet the latest arrival. It wasn't Ms. Valinda. But it was close.
"Oh jeez. Peter, did you go and invite every teacher in the school too?" Gwen asked.
"I invited her, actually." Grandfather said. "I, ah, heard about how damn near every child in Duskerville was going to be on my land and decided I needed more oversight to keep the house from burning down. I met Ms. Uttman, here, when I was in town picking up left-handed widgets, and, well, we seem to have compatible personalities..."
"Seamus, I told you to call me Enid!" The subsitute teacher was completely different from in school, looking happy, embarassed, and...blushing?
Peter heard Mom drop something behind him, but he was too busy trying not to puke a little to pay attention. Dill, meanwhile, had a thoughtful look on his face.
"So...can Peter call you Grandma?"

Oxbgods = What you say when you are surprised by a bovine.

Mina said...

I'm back! I finally got a working computer. Hopefully it doesn't break any time soon.

Also, I think I'm going to make some fan art of Gwen.

@Rubberduck
Oh god, I can't stop laughing at that last part

Darren said...

Um the Muse -
Thanks, Um!

It's what the kids use now instead of hair gel.

Rubberduck -
Awesome passage. I'm going to have to use bleach on my brain now, but awesome passage. Thanks for the fan fiction!

Mina -
Good to have you back! Yes, please, send in fan art!

By the way, I think you 'liked' the fan page recently - I was toying around with my email program, did you get the welcome email okay?

Darren said...

Fan page for everybody else:

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