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- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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5 comments:
Did I miss something? The previous page ended with Gus telling Peter how he heard his friends dying, then it seems to jump to Gus answering a completely different question - possibly about the walking corpses?!
Cat -
DANG IT! Good catch. I reposted just now, adding in the missing half-page.
This is a good argument for not posting when I'm exhausted...
Thanks again, Cat!
The man's look wasn't particularly threatening, or mean, or anything like that. In fact, Peter would have said it was a blank stare, almost peaceful. But the man made no attempt to hide the fact that he was watching Peter, which was a little creepy. He just stood there like a statue as the snow settled lightly on his denim jacket.
The new development sheds light on why Gus wasn't standing there with arms outstretched in a big hug. Still, like Charlie, he pretty well redeemed himself.
The thing about boiled peanut stands still sticks out, kinda sorta.
Darren-
If the story makes me tear up, it's not necessarily a bad thing.
It just means that it's a good story!
(That and I'm a gal who cries at EVERYTHING ;-) )
I just hope that Gus comes out of this knowing that he repaid his debt.
Todd -
Hahaha! You and the boiled peanuts!
Okay, I'll take them out of the print version.
And yes, I think Gus is actually a pretty cool guy. He definitely redeemed himself in my eyes.
Mary -
Awwww. Okay, that's cool.
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