Friday, June 25, 2010

"Peter And The Morgue" Page 12

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6 comments:

DontPanik said...

That description actually made me gt up and turn the light on in my room. Very gruesome, very scary!

daymon34 said...

Peter hit her good, sadly he should have checked to make sure that it wasn't his help coming first. Now they just might tie Peter down to the bed.

A halusination maybe?

Rai said...

Haha! Man she is going to be pissed!

I kind of have this half gruesome, half humorous outlook on this story. I'm thinking it may turn out to be a super scary story, but also kind of expecting a curve ball and the dead guys just want to chat with Peter, like he's some kind of zombie talk show host or psychiatrist.

AnakMoon said...

Is Peter a necromancer? Can that be what the multiple skulls represent? Are they drawn to him, and the power of the 'skulls' gives them a reanimation intelligence? Can Peter raise his own zombie army?!


wv- 'trappe' = "It's a trappe!"

Cat said...

Oooh I like the idea of Peter raising a zombie army, AnakMoon! Hehehe.

What're the odds that the dead bloke's disappeared and there's no way the nurse will believe Peter? And then she goes away and he comes back, and Peter calls for her again and the dead dude disappears again... like in one of those cartoons! :D

aloys said...

DontPanik -
Wow!

daymon34 -
Tie him down? Hmmmm...

Rai -
"My face - do you think it looks that bad?"
"uhhhh..."
"Because I went out on a blind date with this girl, and she got up and left after the appetizers..."
"uhhhh..."

AnakMoon -
Strangely enough, I did a webcomic years and years ago in which a kid has the power to raise zombies, which he uses to form a film crew to shoot a movie and to back him up in a band called "The REAL Dead Kennedys".

Cat -
Hey now, quit giving away my story points!

V-word: aloys. Combinations of metals that aaaaaalmost made the bigtime...but didn't quite get there.