Monday, June 21, 2010

"Peter And The Morgue" Page 8

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6 comments:

daymon34 said...

I am almost willing to bet that it isn't Gus in the back, but then I wouldn't know who would be in it then.

Well it is a small town so maybe they don't think to lock up the morgue.

DontPanik said...

Oh, building tension! I'm getting into this story very quickly!

Mary said...

It's probably Gus in the bag.
I'm just guessing that he either looks like he's asleep or looks REALLY bad.

Rai said...

Maybe I'm just desensitized from my foray with dead bodies, but I can't imagine someone gasping if he looked like he was just asleep. :)

I don't really have any guesses myself, but I'm kind of leaning towards him either looking really bad or *GASP* being aliiiiiiiiiiiiive!! :O I'm thinking this is secretly a magical morgue where the people come back to life!

Um the Muse said...

Best case scenario: Peter gasps. The body already smells horrible. Peter says his goodbye then leaves. The end.

Best case scenario that still allows for a story: Peter gasps. The bag is empty! Gus tells Peter that it wasn't his fault but...

Darren said...

daymon34 -
Well, you lose that bet.

DontPanik -
Good!

Mary -
Okay, you win that bet.

Rai -
PETER AND THE MAGICAL MORGUE!

Um the Muse -
Well, you lose both bets.