Friday, June 18, 2010

"Peter And The Morgue" Page 5

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4 comments:

daymon34 said...

Well Gus didn't make it, maybe his spirit will visit Peter. That or the other two might come out and cause trouble.

At least it isn't a dentist office that gets haunted. All you need is drills and stuff flying around trying to get you.

DontPanik said...

I wonder if something mysterious will awaken Gus in the morgue? I think Peter's time with him was cut a bit too short...

Once again, sorry for the sporadic posts, I had to organise my 21st birthday party... Being in Australia people ended up travelling more than 700 kilometres just for one night at a party! But it took a lot of planning! I promise to comment more often now I have less on my plate!

I quite liked the last story by the way, it had a very good mix of drama, plot and foreboding. Even if I don't always find time to leave feedback, I am still very much an avid reader!

Anonymous said...

Seeing as you mentioned that this hadn't been proofread I wasn't sure if you wanted people pointing things they saw out or not. Anyway in the first part of this page it says Peter's room is on the third floor, then in the next part it says it's on the fourth. Loving the story keep up the good work.

Darren said...

daymon34 -
Hmmmm...

Yes, flying drills would be worse than yetis.

DontPanik -
Awaken Gus? Whaaaaaaaaaaa?

Happy 21st birthday! And welcome back to posting!

Thanks - glad you enjoyed the last story!

Anonymous -
Thank you! Great catch! Yes, I DO want people to point these things out - because it saves me a LOT of time! (And embarrassment down the road...)