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www.PeterAndTheVampires.com
- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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5 comments:
Yeah that would make me worry a bit as well. I wonder what kind of creature/person Peter will run into here.
We already had zombies so I doubt its them, only time will tell.
And it's not a re-animator/Frankenstein type.
Perhaps it's haunted?
Ghost Story!
oh and on the first page theres a word missing
"Grandfather’s widened the tiniest bit as he turned to Dill"
theres no metion of eyes before so im guessign a word is missing.
I'm glad everything is well for you and yours!
Anakmoon's comment reminded me: Rubberduck, I don't know if your V-word was made in irony or not, but I appreciated the comment, anyway. I am not so good at describing the reasons that I like or dislike a page. In fact, I think that that is a rare gift, and is probably even more useful to an author than simply correcting spelling mistakes. So, keep up the good work :)
daymon34 -
Hmmmmmmmm...
Mary -
Hmmmmmmmm...
AnakMoon -
Hmmmmmmmm...
Thanks, I forgot to fix that I guess...
Um the Muse -
It's true, all input is good.
Well...MOST input is good.
Dill's input might not be so good.
"Dude, you should put more FRIENDS into that page. Chandler should come in an' be like, 'Why, why, WHY?'"
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