Tuesday, October 19, 2010

"Peter And The Museum" Page 23 and 24

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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Somehow, I think getting expelled from school is going to be the least of their worries very soon...

WV: serthus: a rare genus of carnivorous plants found in the subarctic tundra of Greenland.

Rubberduck said...

Can minors even go to jail? Pretty sure they have to be at least 16 to be in a proper cell.

(Looked it up - 17-18, depending on jurisdiction. Although I'm not sure about if they're just there until their parents come.)

Which means this guard is a badass, playing head games like that, along with the misleading gun and talking back to Dill. Which means he'll be dead in, oh, 10 pages.

Torths = Those depressions in the ground, like anti-hills which are too small to be called valleys.

daymon34 said...

The 'red shirt' guard has no name yet, unless I missed it. And Rubberduck might have a point about the guard not making it long.

And if the power is out, how does the guard expect the towers to have power.

And now stuff could start moving around, with the power out and the lighting set for a good monster showing.

Darren said...

misslynx -
Indeedy doody. Dill is going to miss FRIENDS.

Rubberduck -
They go to JUVIE!

10 pages, you say? Do I hear 9? 9 pages?

daymon34 -
Dang it, I knew I should have given him a name! Thrown you guys off the track...mrm mrm mrrrrmmmrrrmm...