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Hey Darren, I've thought of the perfect ending for this story Ready? The next update should add this:
Peter paused in amazement at the gravelly voice emanating from the mummy. "Was this guy bothering you kids? I hate people who mess with kids. You guys are free to go, or I've got fresh baked cookies if you want to wait out the blizzard."
Prome: Prom for the accident-prone. Don't worry, guys. We'll get past the decorations stage next year.
I fear they won't be able to use much in the gun room - I doubt they're kept loaded, or with gunpowder. The swords might serve them better...there were swords, right?
Also the mummy would probably recognise a sword and back off, rather than thinking, "The heck is this tube they're pointing at me AARGH AARGH SORCERY.")
"Prome: Prom for the accident-prone. Don't worry, guys. We'll get past the decorations stage next year."
Yeah...man, we don't even KNOW where all that pig's blood came from.
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Aww, I was typing when the story updated. Oh well. Here's what I wrote:
Aww, the story updated while I was writing. Oh well, it still works:
Hey Darren, I've thought of the perfect ending for this story Ready? The next update should add this:
Peter paused in amazement at the gravelly voice emanating from the mummy. "Was this guy bothering you kids? I hate people who mess with kids. You guys are free to go, or I've got fresh baked cookies if you want to wait out the blizzard."
Prome: Prom for the accident-prone. Don't worry, guys. We'll get past the decorations stage next year.
Oops, sorry for writing the intro twice. I couldn't see it the first time I wrote it, and I forgot to preview first.
I like Um's mummy. A lot.
I fear they won't be able to use much in the gun room - I doubt they're kept loaded, or with gunpowder. The swords might serve them better...there were swords, right?
Also the mummy would probably recognise a sword and back off, rather than thinking, "The heck is this tube they're pointing at me AARGH AARGH SORCERY.")
"Prome: Prom for the accident-prone. Don't worry, guys. We'll get past the decorations stage next year."
Yeah...man, we don't even KNOW where all that pig's blood came from.
Nymyte = The power of science.
Um the Muse -
Someday I'm going to have that ending...
Todd -
Yeah, he's a pharaoh-ly nice guy.
Sorry, couldn't resist.
Rubberduck -
I think I will have to use "AARGH AARGH SORCERY," too.
Nice CARRIE reference!
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