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www.PeterAndTheVampires.com
- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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5 comments:
Very interesting, for a moment here I thought that Grandfather might be admitting to being over 250 years old. Can't wait to read this to the boys tonight.
One suggestion if you don't mind. At the beginning of this page you mention Grimoire kicking away the loaded shotgun, and at the end you have him butt -stroking Grandfather with the empty shotgun. You might want to have something at the beginning about Grimoire still having the empty one in his hands, otherwise it's a bit confusing.
250 years stuck in the ground. No wonder he is a little off, and half melted to boot.
Makes me wonder what they really are. If they are made of plastic or just something else that can move to different things.
well Sion Ewig at the end of the last chapter it said ...
"In his good hand was the empty shotgun, the one he had taken from Grandfather in the boiler room. He held it by the barrel, like a club."
Wow, if Peter ever doubted that his grandfather loves him, I hope this proves it!
I have a feeling that little boy is going to be saving HIM this time.
Sion -
Yeah, the page disbursement of information is awkward...
damyon34 -
EXACTLY. As Grandfather said, "There is a precedent, but they used to be wood..."
AnakMoon -
Thanks!
Mary -
More than you know.
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