Wednesday, June 24, 2009

"Peter And The Carnival Of Evil" Page 2

Peter tried to see the man’s face, but all he could see was a pointed, bony chin and a thin, lipless mouth. The rest was hidden in the shadows of a top hat.

“So,” a deep voice said from the center of the room. “What brings you here?”

Peter turned back and saw that where there once had been empty space, now stood a small, wooden table. Behind it sat a man, dressed in a wifebeater t-shirt, overalls, and a funny hat, the kind that a city slicker might wear in an old western. There was a bottle of whisky in front of him, and a half-filled glass that he held in one hand.

The man was ugly. He had an upturned nose, kind of like a pig’s, and long greasy black hair that hung loosely under his hat. There were dark circles under his black eyes, which regarded Peter with a kind of curious detachment. He wasn’t overly muscular, not like a bodybuilder, but his arms looked like they could beat the living crap out of anybody who made him mad.

Maybe it was the tattoos. Small, swirling bands of black reached across his powerful shoulders. Each one looked like a demon’s arm, and each ended in a grasping claw. The man had monster hands creeping their way across his skin.

Behind the man were more bales of hay and a large oval mirror, six feet tall in an old-fashioned wooden frame. It was the kind a grownup woman might have in her fancy bedroom so she could see herself head to foot.

Beyond the mirror, in almost complete darkness, stood something humongous. Peter couldn’t see what it was – just that it looked as tall as a man, but big around as a small car.

“You know you’re here forever, right?” the man at the table asked, his voice so deep it could have rattled windowpanes. He smirked. “We’ve decided to make you a permanent addition.”

Peter didn’t like the tone the man was using, and backed away. He bumped up against the tall, incredibly thin man, who placed a pincer-like hand on Peter’s shoulder.

The ugly man laughed, and was joined by other voices. A rattling wheeze of a chuckle came from the skeletal man behind Peter. A meaty, guttural guffaw boomed out of the mountainous shadow in the corner.

“The funniest thing is,” the ugly man leered, “you think this is all just a dream.”

Peter tried to turn and run, but the pressure on his shoulder turned into two snake-like arms circling around him, constricting the air out of him. He couldn’t hear his own scream, only the laughter of the evil voices swirling around him.


***

Peter flailed his arms against the twisted bedsheets that had somehow entwined him during the night.

He looked wildly around. He was back in his bed, in his room, and everything was normal – no snow outside the window, only a half-lit gray sky.


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9 comments:

AnakMoon said...

I hate those dreams where you know your dreaming but your dream knows your dreaming and can use reverse psychology on you.. those are the ones you can not go back to sleep too in the middle of the night because you know your just going to slip right back into it..

i think this one is going to creep me out more then the last one... its already struck a more.. adult terror rather then childish..

N7 said...

- AnakMoon

I know what you mean.
Dreams like this scare the hell out of me. Yeah, I've had creepy carnival dreams. They were the one reason I didn't run away to join the carnies.
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As I was sitting on my couch watching some late night TV, summer is truly the only time one can do this, I got to thinking about if this was to become a movie, who would play what role?

~N7

AnakMoon said...

- N7
Grandpa should be played by
-James Whitmore
-Christopher Walken
-The old guy from the Pixar chess game short
-James Caan


All i can picture for Peter would be Freddie Highmore

for Dill i think you would have to get some unknown little kid

N7 said...

-AnakMoon

You and my BFF are all about the Freddie Highmore.
He's doing the voice for Astroboy.
o//w//o
Looooove Astroboy!

~N7

daymon34 said...

Oh that scared the pants off of poor Peter. Those kind of dreams always suck.

Though I can't say I have had a bad dream in a long time. Now I think I hear an alarm in it and wake up and find out that my alarm hasn't gone off yet.

Anonymous said...

I wish I dreamt. Insomnia is a cruel mistress. :) Unfortunately I have a sinking suspicion that was not a dream where you know you're dreaming and so does the dream. I wonder if there's a carnival coming to town...

As for roles in a movie... I just can't stop picturing Dill as Dill from the To Kill a Mockingbird movie.

~Rai

Mary said...

Darren-
Add "Something Wicked This Way Comes" (another Bradbury) to that list to read along with Halloween Tree!
Disney did a movie version in 1983 with Jason Robards as the Grandfather and Jonathan Pryce (Yes, the guy from Miss Saigon and POTC) as Mr. Dark.
You want to scare the crud out of yourself, watch it. I remember it being scary even by Disney standards!
Please don't tell me that there are clowns in this one!

Darren said...

AnakMoon -
Actually, you're right: the scary parts in this are much more adult in nature, and not softened nearly as much by humor.
Good suggestions for Grandfather. It's funny, I've been recording podcasts for the first four episodes - that's right, people, soon you'll be able to hear my voice impersonate Dill, which is pretty...um, unusual. Anyway, in the middle of the process I was watching GRAN TORINO, and I realized that Clint Eastwood has the exact same voice that I'm using for Grandfather. So for me, if Clint Eastwood had a big gray beard and was almost completely bald, you'd be pretty close. He DEFINITELY has the voice.

I actually think Richard Harris is closest to how he looks. Not as Dumbledore in the first HARRY POTTER, but here.

(Thanks, MistyCat - I used your HTML!)

Picture him without the cigarette, and with a much longer beard. Of course, he's gone now, so the casting goes on...

As for Dill and Peter, they'd have to be unknowns, or some kids in movies I haven't seen.

daymon34 -
What do you mean, you haven't had a bad dream in awhile? A dream where you wake up before you have to is a BAD DREAM!

rai -
Well, I guess that's natural, since I definitely stole his name and kind of stole his personality (although amped up about 10x) from the book.

Mary -
I remember wanting to see that, but my mom wouldn't let me!
And no clowns in this one, I promise.

Mary said...

Darren-
They took a LOT of liberties with it (ie COMPLETELY diverged from the storyline) but it's still pretty creep.)