Sunday, June 28, 2009

"Peter And The Carnival Of Evil" Page 6

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7 comments:

N7 said...

Poor Dill!
His plan backfired on him!

I'd take them to the circus if I could! Sadly, I'm not part of the story. Or am I? DUN DUN DUN!

Okay.. no... just wishful thinking. *sigh*

~N7

Cat said...

Gutted! Like anyone would want Dill with them on a date lol

Just something I've been wondering - do Peter and Dill still have to work at the mall as their punishment? And if so, how freaked-out are they?!

Darren said...

N7 -
I should run a contest to have someone get their name in a story...hmmmm...

Cat -
Good point. I hadn't thought of it... my guess is they were able to cut some kind of deal where they didn't have to go back in the mall.

Maybe they had Peter's mom ask Ranger Eric very nicely...

Anonymous said...

Bologna? At least that's what the Oscar Meyer commercials tell me. :D

I kind of expected that to backfire on him. Nothing could go that smoothly in your world Mr. Pillsbury :). At least now that mom is out of the house they can sneak off with Beth to the carnival. It won't be quite what they wanted but... it's an option. "But mom, Beth wanted to go!" Anything for Beth?

I also love that mom plopped a tub of ice cream in Beth's lap to get her to shut up. Beth must have been so bewildered. :)

~Rai

Stormy Llew said...

Oh, man...Beth really reminds me of my friend's baby. After 45 minutes of her screaming in my ear yesterday, I can totally put myself into this scene. Too bad I didn't have any ice cream...

Darren said...

Rai -
Don't count Dill out yet!
He's smoooooooooth.
Well, when he's not peeing his pants.

Stormy Llew -
Hi there! Have you posted before? If not, welcome! If so, welcome back! And yeah, if you want to see Beth at her MOST annoying, go check out PETER AND THE CHANGELING! If only Peter and Dill had thought of the ice cream tub THEN...

Stormy Llew said...

True...
When I was worried about Beth in the last story, I read someone's comment where they mentioned that the trolls sent her back and I had a light bulb moment--Beth can definitely take care of herself.

And I comment on occasion...I'm just not very vocal (and I was mainly offline for a month and a half recently) :)