Friday, July 3, 2009

"Peter And The Carnival Of Evil" Page 10

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3 comments:

Cat said...

Talk about bad déjà vu!

Also, is: “Welp, we’re here,” supposed to say "Well, we're here," or was Eric just calling one of them a welp?! (If so, my money would be on Dill! lol)

Anonymous said...

Okay, I kinda take back what I said about Dill, he can be rather annoying at times, and I was slightly miffed at him, but he's grown on me.


Ahhhhh, if I see clowns I'm going to dislike you Darren, I adore your writing as much as I loathe clowns.


And.... is it bad that your writing makes me do my happy dance.... which is is an odd combination of the chicken dance and the uuaa dance...(If you've never seen the uuaa dance watch this.... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j3DGko38IH4&feature=related )

Anyways, yes, I am a geek, and yes I am an anime girl. But I do adore this story so far. I am leaving it up to Dill to drag Peter off to the carnival one day after they close. I know they're going to get in trouble one way or another. So.... Keep up the good work... and yay for being abnormal?


~Mia

Darren said...

Cat -
VERY bad déjà vu.
And no, 'welp' is just a folksy colloquialism for "well" - "Welp, we're here" instead of "Well, we're here." But Dill IS a whelp.

Mia -
Yaaaaay! Mia's onboard the Dill train!
No clowns, Mia. Except in an occasional analogy, simile, or metaphor. But no physical clowns in this story.

Haha! No, I am very glad you do the happy chuuaa dance! (chicken + uuaa) I think that is a most excellent (and flattering to me) reaction!

YAY FOR BEING ABNORMAL!