Monday, July 6, 2009

"Peter And The Carnival Of Evil" Page 13

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7 comments:

Unknown said...

If the dream wasn't real, then this story wasn't really a two-parter.

That would be the ultimate fake-out: a PeterAndTheVampires story that ended early and abruptly because nothing bad happened.

Darren said...

Todd -
Ha ha! Maybe I should do that. Last line: "And Peter went home and went to bed."

How mad would YOU guys be, though!

N7 said...

I wouldn't be mad because I know how twisted you are.

You may end it like that, but then on the next page, something like:

"While Peter was in his nice warm bed, a knife wielding clown, with a small tear at the corner of his eye and a bright red nose, stood above him ready to slice him up."

>>
Maybe I'm the twisted one...

~N7

Anonymous said...

My friend writes stories too, I gave him the idea that in one story the main people who seem to be on the side of good, at the end really turn out to be the bad guys. I like a good twist every once in a while. Especially one that leaves me going: "What? No! Noooo! That can't be right!"

~Rai :)

Darren said...

N7 -
Um...okaaaaay...

Twisted girl...

P.S. You're not scoring any points with Mia "I hate clowns" Faithful Reader.

Rai -
I shall endeavor to come up with a twist like that. One that leaves you going "No! NO! NOOOOOOOOO!"

Although it won't be in this one, I can guarantee.

Anonymous said...

You already did, Mr. Pillsbury, at least for me ;)

~Um the Muse

Darren said...

Um the Muse -
Cool! Which story was it?