Friday, July 31, 2009

"Peter And The Carnival Of Evil" Page 39

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8 comments:

Cat said...

So many questions! Why do they need children? Why Peter specifically? And I'm going to be away for a week now, and am left in suspense! Noooo!

(Glad Gwendolyn's still alive though. Hope she's saved by the time I get back!)

Fiona said...

Might be a mistake: first you say Gwen is standing, then sitting on the floor. Unless you mean she suddenly sat down (with her hands tied?).

Anonymous said...

Poor Gwen. I'm anxious to see why he wants Peter though... Also, he seems to have some extra-sensory Peter locater so Peter may be in trouble even just hiding there...

~Rai

Unknown said...

Teensy oversight. (Had swum.)

AnakMoon said...

N7 - i don't think its the family curse cause earlier when i had alluded to it Mr. Pillsbury said -
"these guys are totally and completely separate from anything we've seen before, and have their own motives for the evil they do, unrelated to the Curse or Peter's ancestors."

and oh poor Gwen!

Johnson said...

Ditto to Fiona's comment.
Relatively minor housekeeping issue: is there any way to repeat the hyperlink to the "Next Page" at the bottom of the comments section? It's not a really big deal but it would be nice not to have to scroll back up to the end of the chapter to get to the 'link. Thanks ... and for the fun story(ies), too.

Anonymous said...

Mr. Pillsbury, I noticed a slight typo too: "We’ve don’t have much time" doesn't need the have ('ve).

On a different note: N7, would you mind not using the f-word? I know that you misspelled it and most of the commentaries seem to come from adults, but still, this is still a story meant to appeal to all ages.

Besides that, I'm with you all the way. Walrus Man, you have just been condemned to the shoot list of jackholes. Do you have any last words?

~Um the Muse

P.S Do you think that maybe Cyrus is forcing them to do this? After all, he is very definately ruling over them through fear. OTOH, maybe not, since, if push came to shove, a lot of the have their own abilities to help them flee from/ defeat the wicked Cyrus. Hmmm...

Darren said...

N7 -
Whoooooaaaa, watch it with the f-bombs there, N7! You know I love you, but let's keep it PG, or I'll have to sic Wally on you.

Cat -
At the end of the story, I'll answer any questions that aren't taken care of...actually, there's already one in everybody's questions that I don't have an adequate answer to...I better start thinking...

Fiona -
Good catch. Thanks!

Rai -
Hmmmm...I better come up with a good answer...

Todd -
Thanks!

AnakMoon -
You can call me Darren, A.M.!

And good memory. Yeah, these guys are just bad dudes all on their own. We'll find out what they're up to quite soon.

Johnson -
Um...I'll see what I can come up with. I'm not the swiftest when it comes to manipulating Blogger's internal bits, even though it's quite easy...

Um -
Thanks! Man, I fell asleep on this page.

Cyrus definitely rules Wally by fear. The others, I don't know...you be the judge.