Monday, August 16, 2010

"Peter And The Helpers" Page 7

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4 comments:

Mina said...

NOOO!!! I need the next page!
Geez, your writing is too good :P

wv:culnewa

Rai said...

I have to see this Inception. You've twice now referenced it in relation to one of my comments. :D I like that idea of the deeper you go the slower time goes, though it makes me wonder how deep this room actually goes.

Dill saw "them," now I'm hoping this room doesn't go and do anything like the changeling, one goes in and one comes out to replace the first. But, they're helpers... so they're good... right? Right??

Rubberduck said...

Spooky! I liked Dill's face changing expressions between the ticks of the clock, very effective. And now I'm wondering what could POSSIBLY make him wet his pants (sarcasm hand, thought I am honestly wondering. Brownies here we come?).

Retistn = What a Texan is doing after he fails a vital exam. Which is not unusual for Texans. Zing!

(Just kidding, love you guys really.)

Darren said...

Mina -
Thank you! I'm glad you like the cliffhangers!

Rai -
I think you'd like it. Just don't see it when you're sleepy, like my dad, who took a nap here and there. You do that, you're toast as far as understanding it.

Rubberduck -
Thanks!

Poor Dill, he don't get NO respect...

And that makes TWO votes for Brownies...hmmmm...