I wouldn't be mad because I know how twisted you are.
You may end it like that, but then on the next page, something like:
"While Peter was in his nice warm bed, a knife wielding clown, with a small tear at the corner of his eye and a bright red nose, stood above him ready to slice him up."
My friend writes stories too, I gave him the idea that in one story the main people who seem to be on the side of good, at the end really turn out to be the bad guys. I like a good twist every once in a while. Especially one that leaves me going: "What? No! Noooo! That can't be right!"
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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If the dream wasn't real, then this story wasn't really a two-parter.
That would be the ultimate fake-out: a PeterAndTheVampires story that ended early and abruptly because nothing bad happened.
Todd -
Ha ha! Maybe I should do that. Last line: "And Peter went home and went to bed."
How mad would YOU guys be, though!
I wouldn't be mad because I know how twisted you are.
You may end it like that, but then on the next page, something like:
"While Peter was in his nice warm bed, a knife wielding clown, with a small tear at the corner of his eye and a bright red nose, stood above him ready to slice him up."
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Maybe I'm the twisted one...
~N7
My friend writes stories too, I gave him the idea that in one story the main people who seem to be on the side of good, at the end really turn out to be the bad guys. I like a good twist every once in a while. Especially one that leaves me going: "What? No! Noooo! That can't be right!"
~Rai :)
N7 -
Um...okaaaaay...
Twisted girl...
P.S. You're not scoring any points with Mia "I hate clowns" Faithful Reader.
Rai -
I shall endeavor to come up with a twist like that. One that leaves you going "No! NO! NOOOOOOOOO!"
Although it won't be in this one, I can guarantee.
You already did, Mr. Pillsbury, at least for me ;)
~Um the Muse
Um the Muse -
Cool! Which story was it?
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