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- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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7 comments:
She collapsed again him and silently sobbed.
"She collapsed against him" makes more sense.
Todd -
Whoops! Thanks!
Also "ewww" had an n at the end.
I'm thinking I'm way overdoing the criticism for this story. You're allowed to stretch things a little, anyway.
Just one last comment: I can sort of see Dill behaving this way, but on the other hand, he's being very blasé about things that he would normally not want to talk about. I wonder what the court would've reacted if he had responded that he "didn't want to talk about it."
“No, I think that’s what you old people would call it,”
Zing! An honet chuckle elicited at this one. Good work!
So I guess Grandfather's plan is to show that they're too messed up in the head to have distinguished between a mummy and some random lunatic in, say, a straitjacket? So Gwen is now lonely and craving attention, Dill is a delusional...well, idjit, and Peter - I guess he's going to make Peter into a pychopath.
Zonserop = An alien overlord from the distant galaxy of Zzax. Travels to Earth for the curries.
I think that's the loudest I have ever laughed while reading this.
Yeah, and I was wondering why he isn't saying "I don't wanna talk about it!"
Has Dill gotten over the fact that he's doomed to have monsters come after him now?
WV: worbacc
A large, brown furred creature that comes from the faerie world. It's diet consists of children under the age of 14.
Um the Muse -
Haha! That's TRUE - that's totally going in the rewrite...
Rubberduck -
Yaaaaay! A theory! You win the "First Theory" prize!
Mina -
Awesome! Glad you laughed!
Yeah, I totally forgot about that part...
PS - Maybe Dill doesn't mind talking about the brownies as much because they were one of the least traumatizing creatures he's run up against. Probably the least, actually.
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