Wednesday, February 2, 2011

"Peter and the Boogeymen" Page 26 and 27

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5 comments:

Um the Muse said...

@Darren from last post: That would be pretty cool, I have to admit. I had the mental image of this story turning into a spoof with Michael Jackson possessing Scott. Yeah, it still wouldn't be a good idea, but it'd be fun while it lasts.

Btw, the missing word in the last post was "idea".

Rubberduck said...

The image of Fallon's smile slowly leaving his face is chilling. And yeah, he's REALLY pushing this ouija board - I wonder what he actually gets out of Scott using it aside from the giggles.

Popedni = Jax's standard pizza order. Contains anchovies. They said no one could finish it. They were wrong. What a guy.

Todd said...

I wonder what he actually gets out of Scott using it aside from the giggles.

Corruption?

AnakMoon said...

"...and forgive us our trespasses,
as we forgive those who trespass against us,
and lead us not into temptation,
but deliver us from evil..."

I like the implied pretense that Scott has to accept the board freely given, and the manipulation was top notch! And now I think we all know where these boogeymen are going to come from. My new question is what can Mike do to push Scott over the edge that he hasn't done yet? For a little boy who fantasizes so much about mayhem has such a strong conviction against using something that could possibly grant him each one.

Darren said...

Um the Muse -
What's funny is that I have an awesome "evil dancing thingee" story in mind...

But not this one.

And no, that dude from the Buffy musical is not in it.

Rubberduck -
THAT is the question!

(For that 'to be or not to be' stuff.)

Todd -
Of the innocent!

Or, at least with Scott's rather violent mind, the semi-innocent.

AnakMoon -
Glad you liked the manipulation!

What can he do to Scott to push him over the edge?

Glad you asked...