Monday, September 14, 2009

"Peter And The Werewolves" Page 9

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6 comments:

Unknown said...

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.

Humor aside, I love the first half: I forgot for a minute it's still summer, between the description of fall colors and talk of turkey dinners.

Kelly said...

Aww, I miss Thanksgiving now. All these descriptions makes me long for fall.

And boy, Dill just doesn't know when to stop.

daymon34 said...

Melissa is such a stinker, yeah I would like watching Dill work as well.

And try not to get to happy Dill, you will make her boss angry. Then again he is already pissed off, so it will be a short trip for him.

Um the Muse said...

Ah, Mr. Pillsbury, you don't have to change the name. That sounds just like what a kid might make up. It was the kid's fault, not yours ;)

Cat said...

Ah Dill, you said you'd have to do what Beth said at college. Surely you didn't have to spend all that time on the way there obeying her?! And it looked like such a great plan, too :D Hahah now he runs the risk of a very boring time stuck in an office with an annoying toddler and an annoyed Peter!

By the way Darren, I think you missed an apostrophe in "employees' carpark".

Darren said...

Todd -
Glad you liked it! I was a little worried that there was too much description on this page, so I'm glad to know it drew you in.

Kelly -
Awww...well, the good news is, it will be here soon. And you're right, Dill has a problem knowing when enough is enough.

daymon34 -
Of course. Watching Dill squirm is one of Melissa's great joys.

Um the Muse -
True, Um, but it was a Spanish-speaking kid. I think he'd know better than a gringo like me...

Cat -
Good point. Why didn't Dill think of that?!

Cool, thanks for pointing that out.