Friday, February 5, 2010

"Peter And The Dark Side" Page 3 and 4

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7 comments:

Unknown said...

Oh snap. Peter is going to turn into a jerk in this one right? Going to turn to the dark side as they say. Like when Superman gets hit with red kryptonite.

AnakMoon said...

Hahahah just don't make him all emo like they did in Spider Man

I can understand Peter's anger, i was that kid in school, it sucked.

Mary said...

Anak- Me too. Still am and I'm *cough* Thirty-one *Cough*
Some days though...

Rubberduck said...

Peter must fight his deadliest foe yet - himself! Forget about red kryptonite, this'll be more like the effects of black kryptonite. Superman splits into two supermen, one good and one evil.

(Seriously, not making that up.)

Dark Peter will run around town getting up to all kinds of hijinks and ruining his life.

That or he's hitting his teens a few years early.

Quill = A porcupine's way of saying 'No means no.'

daymon34 said...

Oh fun, an evil twin. That or Peter is just going to rebel like no tomorrow and hurt people. Starting with Tad, he has fought stuff that would make Tad crap himself.

Maybe he will talk Frank into scaring him senseless.

Cat said...

I get what Dill means about the bullies being part of the "real world" - it's such an odd distinction after they've fought vampires etc, but so true. Still, if I had been Peter with some tosser standing on my back and telling me to say "You're a piece of crap", I would have had to have a very compelling reason not to say "You're a piece of crap" :D Even better if I could look him in the eye while saying it so he'd know exactly who I meant :P Yeah I was never one to back down from bullies, although I'm more likely to pick my battles and exercise caution these days.

This story looks like it's going to be psychologically very interesting. Wanna know more about the curse, damnit!

Darren said...

Anthony -
What up, Anthony! OH SNAP is right!

AnakMoon -
Whhhhaaaaa? I'm totally doing an homage to that scene in this story, except with the Forbidden Dance - the Lambada!

Mary -
Haha. I got you beat, Mary. I'm not sayin' by how much, though.

Rubberduck -
Maybe he IS hitting his teens early...

Dark Peter...like Dark Phoenix...

daymon34 -
Yeah, it really should just be as easy as getting Frank to be his bodyguard. Like MY BODYGUARD, that 80's movie I never saw.

Cat -
It IS an odd distinction, isn't it? But a VERY real one.

And you're going to have to wait a little bit more for the Curse...