Saturday, February 6, 2010

"Peter And The Dark Side" Page 5 and 6

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6 comments:

DontPanik said...

Whoa, I don't like this Peter at all! I hope this one is over quickly, and without too much lasting damage!

Mary said...

Doctor Jekyll, meet Mister Hyde!
It was great to see the story from Dill's POV.
Is that how this one will carry out?
Does Dill get to save the day?

Rai said...

Haha, I love how Dill even has to tell his brain not to think about it. And this new Peter is pretty badass. I like that he told the bus driver off, but I'm not a big fan of how aloof he is towards Dill. :(

And skiing is NOT for sissies! >>

Rubberduck said...

A peek inside Dill's mind...excuse me while I wash my hands.

So, a split personality? These things never end well, Peter, don't you read comics? Grandfather had better find a way to stop Dark Peter, because no-one else in the town has a chance against the unlocked badassery contained within Regular Peter. I wonder if Grandfather's crabbiness and distance is a defense mechanism to prevent him going off the deep end like this?

Extath = one who used to be a Tath, a kind of Irish bezerker. Extaths are usually exceptionally strong-willed - consider that Chuchulainn didn't have the mental fortitude to stop being a Tath...

Darren said...

DontPanik -
Whhhhaaaaa? You don't LIKE him?

Shhhh...don't let him hear you say that...

Mary -
Yeah, I enjoyed writing it from Dill's perspective. Lots of fun! As for Dill's heroism...hmmmm...

Rai -
I think he's pretty badass, too. Of course, he's just an ass to Dill.

Amen on the skiing.

Rubberduck -
Ewwwwwwwwwwwww!

Hmmmm...you're getting pretty deep into the psychology of GF there...

Nigel said...

YES! Peter takes entirely too much crap in my opinion, I like seeing him put the fear of zod into those around him.