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- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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4 comments:
Well the problem with hiding under the downed tree is that Snowy thru it. So it should be able to lift it, though that could be Gus coming to check on him after getting pounded.
And that wasn't a helpful thought Peter, hopefully Snowy only wants to take him away not pound him flat.
Ah, snow is insulating if you burrow under it - I wonder if that's the blessing at work? :D
Also I think there was an extra "had" in the line "In ten seconds he had had a medium-sized trench in the ground." Maybe the second "had" should be a "dug"?
Noooo! If Peter just hides himself and Dil, Stu's going to get eaten!
Well, and Gus, but I suspect the writing was already on the wall in that case. :-(
WV: gogrin: Dialectical variation of the word "goblin", as spoken by actual goblins, whose tusks get in the way of standard English enunciation.
daymon34 -
Lift it? Hmmmmm...
Cat -
Good catch. Thanks!
misslynx -
Stu turned into stew?
Hmmmmm...
Good use of 'tusks,' by the way...
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