Saturday, August 8, 2009

"Peter And The Carnival Of Evil" Page 47

Hey guys - in an effort to reach more readers, I'm doing some things on YouTube related to Peter And The Vampires. Let me know what you think!









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9 comments:

AnakMoon said...

*giggle* Dill reminds me of a skittish puppy when he is around Grandfather

Zoquara said...

Grandpa! Let's hope HE listens!

(And why shouldn't he?)

Cat said...

Yay he might believe them! (No guarantee though!) Maybe we'll find out he's had suspicions of the carnival already.

As for Eng pretending amnesia, I don't think that would work. He's already demonstrated far too much lucidness as Gwendolyn, what with her able to account for what happened and knowing who Dill and Peter are (though I wonder if "she" could say where they go to school?!) and remembering about the "bet". Probably a bit late now though, no one's going to believe them after this except maybe Grandfather!

Anonymous said...

I don't know if it was an intentional slip, but in the last chapter, "Gwendolyn" called Peter a little kid--even though they're supposedly in the same grade level.

~Um the Muse

Anonymous said...

Just got back from camping and man am I glad Grandfather showed up! I know he'll believe them. After all this carnival comes to town every year, and they steal a kid from every town (I think), so grandfather must suspect something! I hope...

~Rai

Anonymous said...

I loved the movie! You have a great reading/speaking voice and it helped the visualization along. I'm going to forward the video to my friends a post it on my facebook because I think a lot more people need to read this series.

And hopefully Grandpa will believe the kids.

N7 said...

Oh Grandfather!

You must believe them! If you do not, it will be the end of the most awesome Gwen!

Also, away on Holidays so I may not be around commenting and stuff. I found internet where I am now, but may not be able to read after tonight.

;A;
But YAY for catch up!

Darren said...

AnakMoon -
I'd say that's a pretty good description.

Andrea -
Exactly! HE knows the boys don't lie. (Usually.)

Cat -
In past cases, I'm sure nobody prodded too deeply. In Gwen's particular case, given the two options - selective amnesia, or a mirror sucked out her soul - which one is most likely to be believed?

Sure, Peter and Dill could prove that Gwen wasn't right in the head - but nobody's going to accept the REAL truth. And, as with most adults in Peter's world, they'll just go with the most convenient real-world explanation.

Um the Muse -
Yeah, Eng doesn't know their names, so he's referring to them as 'that boy' and 'the little kid' (Dill).

Rai -
Grandfather DOES have some experience with Cyrus in the past, but don't get all excited...it's not what you think...

creativexangst -
Thank you so much for the kind words, and thanks even more for forwarding it on to your friends! I've got to get a link to Facebook up on the site, and link the updates, too...good, you've inspired me to get it done!

N7 -
Have an awesome vacation, and yes, you can look forward to 4-7 pages all in one dose when you come back!

Darren said...

Sorry, that's Al PHLIPP and the Woo Team.