I go away from the internet for a few days and I come back to this!?
Wow... I would surely hate to be there when all this shrieking and melting and imploding into one’s self is going on.
._."
Glad they were able to free the... what are they now? Ghost Children? I'm assuming they have no bodies to go back to, so ghost children would have to do... and Gwen.
Hmm... I read in a comment that someone [sorry I forgot who!] said Gwen should join their Supernatural Fighting Squad or SFS, as I will now refer to Dill and Peter as. I think this a splendid idea... but I doubt the boys would like it. I mean what kind of self-respecting 10 year old boy would want to hang out with a girl who might have cooties?
Also, I'm starting to agree with AnakMoon about Grandfather... and it breaks my heart doing so.
;A;
He would be more help if he would just tell the boys what has happened in the past, or just you know, be like a background person who briefs then on what they might be fighting and how to protect themselves and rescue others.
Eeeew, big melting puddles of fat! How gross! I'm glad he finally smashed those mirrors, though I suppose the freed children can't be more than ghosts, since their bodies will be long gone. Still, they were able to interact physically (with Bones at least), so maybe they can help Peter and Dill fight evil! They'd make good scouts, especially if they can go through walls or turn invisible :D
Just got my internet back and... wow! I was kind of hoping that when the mirror shattered Cyrus would to but this is cool too. Morbid, but I'm beginning to wonder if that's just my sort of thing.
AnakMoon - Yeah, there are several things I wish I could just animate - this is one of them. The dead man looking up in the garden, the swamp monster, the changeling, Grimoire, the Psycho Trick or Treaters...can't wait. But it would be like eating all the icing off the cake...
AnakMoon & N7 - I have to strike a careful balance with Grandfather. If he saves Dill and Peter all the time, then it just looks like Dill and Peter are wimps. I guess it looks like Grandfather's the wimp now, but he'll have a very unwimpy, crucial role in the next story (though his part will be brief), and he'll be a very prominent (and unwimpy) player in the story after that.
daymon34 - Ha! I didn't even think of the Wicked Witch of the West when I wrote Midge's demise!
Yes, an eternity of bad luck for the owner of the mirror if it gets broken...
Cat - Hmmmm...
Rai - Ha - just wait!
I KNOOOOW! You and N7 (and maybe AnakMoon and another person, I forget) should start the "We Heart Grandfather" fan club!
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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Oh i cant wait to see this in your movie renditions on youtube!!
I'm beginning to see grandfather as a chauffeur who keeps getting in the way and just keeps getting himself hurt...
I go away from the internet for a few days and I come back to this!?
Wow... I would surely hate to be there when all this shrieking and melting and imploding into one’s self is going on.
._."
Glad they were able to free the... what are they now? Ghost Children? I'm assuming they have no bodies to go back to, so ghost children would have to do... and Gwen.
Hmm... I read in a comment that someone [sorry I forgot who!] said Gwen should join their Supernatural Fighting Squad or SFS, as I will now refer to Dill and Peter as. I think this a splendid idea... but I doubt the boys would like it. I mean what kind of self-respecting 10 year old boy would want to hang out with a girl who might have cooties?
Also, I'm starting to agree with AnakMoon about Grandfather... and it breaks my heart doing so.
;A;
He would be more help if he would just tell the boys what has happened in the past, or just you know, be like a background person who briefs then on what they might be fighting and how to protect themselves and rescue others.
:D
I am melting... Ok it had to be said, I couldn't help it.
Well looks like the carnival is finished for good this time. Looks like the mirror has a heavy price to pay if it gets damaged.
Eeeew, big melting puddles of fat! How gross! I'm glad he finally smashed those mirrors, though I suppose the freed children can't be more than ghosts, since their bodies will be long gone. Still, they were able to interact physically (with Bones at least), so maybe they can help Peter and Dill fight evil! They'd make good scouts, especially if they can go through walls or turn invisible :D
Just got my internet back and... wow! I was kind of hoping that when the mirror shattered Cyrus would to but this is cool too. Morbid, but I'm beginning to wonder if that's just my sort of thing.
P.S. Rai does love Grandfather!
~Rai
AnakMoon -
Yeah, there are several things I wish I could just animate - this is one of them. The dead man looking up in the garden, the swamp monster, the changeling, Grimoire, the Psycho Trick or Treaters...can't wait. But it would be like eating all the icing off the cake...
AnakMoon & N7 -
I have to strike a careful balance with Grandfather. If he saves Dill and Peter all the time, then it just looks like Dill and Peter are wimps. I guess it looks like Grandfather's the wimp now, but he'll have a very unwimpy, crucial role in the next story (though his part will be brief), and he'll be a very prominent (and unwimpy) player in the story after that.
daymon34 -
Ha! I didn't even think of the Wicked Witch of the West when I wrote Midge's demise!
Yes, an eternity of bad luck for the owner of the mirror if it gets broken...
Cat -
Hmmmm...
Rai -
Ha - just wait!
I KNOOOOW! You and N7 (and maybe AnakMoon and another person, I forget) should start the "We Heart Grandfather" fan club!
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