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- by Darren Pillsbury
PETER AND THE VAMPIRES is a horror/comedy web novel (and a free podcast!)about a normal, 10-year-old kid who moves into a sinister town filled with supernatural horribleness. The series is composed of different "monster of the week" stories - kind of like THE X-FILES crossed with THE SIMPSONS (if Mr. Burns were a ghoul and something terrifying lived in the town dump). "Peter And The Dead Men" is the first story in the collection. A new page is posted every day.
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9 comments:
Peter! Have you lost your mind?!? Oh I get it now the old chat 'em up 'till Grandpa shows gig. Lol at Dills last line, way to confuse the doggies.
Amy
Well, now Peter's got them right where he wants them. He's no action man, but he can probably outsmart the wolves. And now he's given the stage to Dill, who can talk the hind leg off a donkey, which would be even more useful if it weren't a metaphor.
This is fun while it lasts.
Is Jon omniscent? Peter and Dill were supposed to have left before there was action, yet Jon volunteers they got away from specifically Kyle, and that they really are werewolves.
Melissa has stayed so in the dark about Peter and Dill's adventures, I'm wondering how she'll take the news Charlie died while in charge of them.
And holding still for the bite like lunch on a plate, that would be real smart and no telling where he would bite. Just a little off the throat please, it's getting a bit of a bump.
Sorry not born yesterday, no trust for you. I wonder if there is still water in that building, then they can wet down the tiles and slow them down a little. Ever see a dog or cat run across wet tiles, they slide real good.
@todd--I wondered that, too. When did Jon see Peter? He yelled at him as soon as he hit the street in front of the frat, so maybe he's making some big assumptions?
Yeah how did the hapless duo know Kyle changed and let the boys in on their secret... unless they heard him howl... How long till Mom wonders where they are? And Charlie being killed can be blamed on the same animal that's been attacking the cows.. it just wandered in a bit more towards civilization, and an apparently nearly deserted sorority row.
And man.. don't you envy kids being able to run and not get side aches after wolfing down {no pun intended} 2 thanksgiving meals within hours of each other?!!
Veri-ly gramps 'carphar' way
Dill's rejection is the best, now they have something to really think about. According to his claim they have encountered a vampire and lived. That means that they aren't the only classical supernatural in the area and the two kiddies might be far more dangerous than they assumed. Or if they don't think in this direction they must have had the same offer by some other werewolf - Kyle. The most likely assumption by Jon is that they simply lied though. Its just as funny as when vampires and the like bragged in front of Buffy how powerful they are.
Amy -
Glad you like Peter's strategy...
Rubberduck -
Haha! I like that, metaphor or no.
Todd -
On page 40, Kyle howls out the window. We'll see some more inter-wolf communication shortly, but he was basically recalling Jon and Chubbs, telling them that Peter and Dill were getting away.
If you don't like that explanation, you can just figure that when Jon and Chubbs heard the wolf and showed up, they saw Peter and Dill running from the frat house, and Kyle was nowhere to be seen. So Jon is assuming they did something to him. And maybe, just maybe, that included killing him.
daymon34 -
That would be fun to see, wouldn't it?
Stormy Llew -
See above.
I mean, he saw Peter running from the direction of the frat, he heard Kyle, then Kyle doesn't appear...
AnakMoon -
I hadn't thought about all that food...good point...
Eldoran -
I think Jon figures Dill is just BSing him, if he even thinks he heard right. Remember, even though he's now a werewolf, I don't think Jon believes anything ELSE supernatural exists...and especially wouldn't buy it from two fourth-graders.
Yeah, the lying part (or just being plain confused) is the best assumption.
Remember, even though he's now a werewolf, I don't think Jon believes anything ELSE supernatural exists...and especially wouldn't buy it from two fourth-graders.
I suppose when you're part of a werewolf pack, you lose sight of the fact it's supernatural. It's nice the Werewolves aren't in cahoots with the Dead Men, the Vampires, etc.
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